[翻譯] 加賀岬 in English

看板KanColle (艦隊Collection)作者kimozy (Idril)時間10年前 (2016/04/12 12:27)推噓26(26推 0噓 8→)

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補充說明：這個版本的翻譯的確大量參考了 http://goo.gl/w6KfIO 的英文翻譯。因此本人放棄所有著作權，此版本之著作權仍然屬於 "ToastSoul"。雖然我還是覺得我修改過的這個版本比較好（小聲因為最近認識了幾個美國的二戰迷，所以打算順道介紹一下這首加賀的主題曲讓他們了解(X) 騙 p 幣(O)。我的日文程度其實挺差的，如果有任何改進的建議非常感謝。 Kaga Misaki この手に寄せる袱紗朱の色 The fukusa passed in these hands, the colour of dying autumn [1] この目開いてその顔見れば If I open these eyes, could see the face 翼束ねて波濤を越えてあげる I could flap these wings and overcome the stormy seas for you 指を絡めて抱きしめたなら If our fingers would interwine and you would hold me close 炎の海も怖くはないの Then I would not fear even the blazing ocean 翼を放ち戦の空へ駆ける Release these wings and advance into the sky of battles 私とあなた射掛ければそう You and I, if we shoot these arrows, right 朧月夜がきれいね The hazy moonlit night is beautiful, isn't it 今夜の勝負は In the battle of this night 退くに退けない譲れはしない Even facing difficulties, I shall give in, never 女心よねえ After all, it is the heart of a woman 胸秘めた想い一つ This feeling of adoring, I would hold secretly to my chest いいのよこのまま This would be enough for me 心が殘るのなら As long as this feeling of mine would remain 海向かい願い一つ Facing the ocean, making a wish 百萬石の誇りよ This is the pride of a million koku; [2] 加賀岬 Cape Kaga この指ふれたゆがけ溫もり The yugake these fingers touched still remains warm [3] 心殘してその先見れば If I leave the feeling in heart and look ahead 翼畳んで港に向かい還る I could fold these wings, return to home port 見敵必殺心情なれど Despite with the willing that must kill every enemy 心の隙も見せたくないの I still have some weakness in my heart that I do not wish to show 若鶴達も戦の海へ疾る The young cranes fly towards the sea of battles as well [4] 一の矢二の矢射掛ければそう The first arrow, the second arrow, if we shoot these arrows, right 鎧袖一觸けれども It would be so easy, however 今度の勝負は The battle of this time 油斷できないできるはずない I cannot let my guard down, I should not be able 女心よねえ After all, it is the heart of a woman 胸秘めた想い一つ This feeling of adoring, I would hold secretly to my chest いいのよこのまま I would be fine just this way 何かが殘るのなら As long as something of my feeling could remain 赤城の山に願い一つ Facing Mount Akagi, making a wish [5] 百萬石の祈りよ These are the prayers of a million koku: 加賀岬 Cape Kaga 私とあなた射掛ければほら You and I, if we would be together 桜吹雪がきれいね The falling sakura are beautiful, aren't they 今夜の勝負も In the battle of this night as well 退くに退けない退けるはずない I could never concede again once more 女心よねえ After all, it is the heart of a woman 胸秘めた願い一つ One wish, that I hold secretly to my chest いいのよこのまま This would be enogh for me 心が殘るのなら As long as this feeling of mine would remain 忘れない願い一つ The feeling of adoring that I would never forget 百萬石の誇りよ This is the pride of a million koku: 加賀岬 Cape Kaga ------ [1] Fukusa is a type of Japanese textile. The colour of dying autumn is the colour of leaves in the late autumn, i.e., dark red. [2] Kaga is the name of an old nation in Japan, the carrier Kaga was named after it, and "koku" is a Japanese unit of volume of rice. One koku is approximately 278.3 litres. This part means that the old nation Kaga could produce a million koku per year. [3] "Yugake" is the protection glove with Japanese bow (Yumi). [4] The young cranes means the two carriers in the 5th Carrier Fleet, i.e., Shokaku and Zuikaku. "Kaku" means crane in Japanese. [5] The carrier "Akagi" was named exactly after Mount Akagi. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc), 來自: 36.234.156.225 ※ 文章網址: https://www.ptt.cc/bbs/KanColle/M.1460435232.A.CCB.html

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angel84326

04/12 12:28, , 1^F

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純興趣啦，我也有參考那個版本。我覺得有改進空間所以我就自己跳下來囉。那個版本很多原文中的虛擬式沒有翻譯出來。而且我也想試著翻個比較有詩意的版本。

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wai0806

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HinataHiirag

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希望可以幫助大家推廣艦娘給西方朋友們 (′・ω・‵)a

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momiji09

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hary5155

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這種要非～常～專業的翻譯才做得到。小的只是個外語學院的 BA 而已。而且其實我之前主修是德文，副修英文，日文是自己硬上的。(′・ω・‵)a ※ 編輯: kimozy (36.234.156.225), 04/12/2016 13:08:22

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jvw595

04/12 13:21, , 9^F

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HinataHiirag

04/12 13:22, , 10^F

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(′・ω・‵)||| 這不是讓大家更看不懂而已嗎來個例子好囉。 Guten Tag, ich bin das erste Schiff der Bismarck-Klasse, Bismarck. Vergiss nicht. ※ 編輯: kimozy (36.234.156.225), 04/12/2016 13:35:08

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bladesinger

04/12 13:37, , 11^F

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提督、貴方の艦隊は少し規律が緩んでいるようね。私が一から教えてあげるわ。 Teidoku, deiner Flotte fehlt die Disziplin. Lass ich dir von Anfang an lehren. ※ 編輯: kimozy (36.234.156.225), 04/12/2016 13:45:54

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litcurler

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vincent0728

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HinataHiirag

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是說我看 Bis 子的台詞，翻成德文的話真的都很不客套 (′・ω・‵)a

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zx126126987

04/12 13:59, , 15^F

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我覺得日文不能算啦其實...

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a951l753vin

04/12 14:16, , 16^F

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其實說起來麥姊應該是超傲嬌。（不熟的）德國人真的不爽要對你講難聽話的時候反而一定是用敬語。麥姊的台詞如果還原成德文的感覺反而真的像是姊姊在教訓提督。有些甚至像是公主在對僕人講話 (′・ω・‵) ※ 編輯: kimozy (36.234.156.225), 04/12/2016 14:24:49

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kingaden

04/12 14:25, , 17^F

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很熟的就垃圾話連發囉。不過德文罵人通常是不太帶髒字的。什麼 Scheisse, Arschloch 之類的通常只有街上小混混會講。不過其實這方面（現代的）德國人跟日本人有點像。就算德國人對你真的很不爽，通常講話還是會很講究禮貌。可能會用一些對比諷刺你做得很差。比如說上班的話，上司不爽表現，可能會說：跟我來，看一下其他人怎麼做。

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ray14400

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zyyxyyz

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zyyxyyz

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可惜都是閩南人 :p 不過大學的時候因為覺得拉丁文很帥所以自己念了一點點，瘋狂查字典的話勉強可以讀。

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tpakiller

04/12 15:56, , 21^F

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過獎了 qq 其實現在的本行是統計，英文以外的都忘了很多... 例如 #1MaIUpkN (KanColle)

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kiki41052

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在我看來麥姊真的是會用力踩你...

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LilykoKun

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※ 編輯: kimozy (36.234.156.225), 04/12/2016 18:35:45

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yichenglee

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HukataNami

04/12 18:51, , 25^F

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用放置語音再舉個例好了：もう～！この私を放置するなんて、貴方も相當偉くなったものね！出撃とか演習とか付き合ってあげたっていいのよ！？ Ach, wie kannst du es wagen, uns inaktiv zu lassen! Du musste sehr grossartig werden, oder? Wir koennten aber mit dir uebungen oder angreifen! 註：用複數第一人稱自稱是貴族的意涵。 "Du musste sehr grossartig werden, oder?" 典型的德文酸人法：你一定是變得很偉大了是吧？ ※ 編輯: kimozy (36.234.156.225), 04/12/2016 19:13:43 而且其實只要看日文就大概知道麥姊是個傲嬌了。麥姊全部語音都沒有對提督用敬稱... ※ 編輯: kimozy (36.234.156.225), 04/12/2016 19:27:13

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