Re: [24春] 蔚藍檔案 05 其實動畫改編的不太好
※ 引述《acsqqx》之銘言
:12話濃縮後節奏還是一坨怎麼可能變24話會更好?我可能會看到睡著
回文看到版友這句我簡直如夢初醒
是啊現在缺的就是把阿拜多斯個人劇情適當的插入主線啊!
比方說茜香綁架事件,應該做成2集
適當的在前後插入個人故事,大概就是前面放一些,然後綁架,綁架完再放最後一篇盪鞦
韆
那段
沒把大叔個人故事放進去,誰知道她晚上都在巡邏的事情
而且大叔也該在「那個」之前,跑過跟老師去水族館的事件
故事轉折更漂亮,對於那個事件也會情緒更到位
瞬間
老師的戲份、角色的立體度、故事的節奏、什麼都有了
是啊!幹!這就是問題啊!
拼命跑主線,但主線人物塑造根本不完整
劇情又快老師又旁觀感重
整個問題不就是缺乏編入個人故事嗎!
甚至社團故事也該放進來
這下做成24集一點也不水
反而交代、塑造的更完整
誒這真的不行耶
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